It is hard to keep that in words. You used many different instruments and holy feckhole you did it well!
One thing that compositions often do wrong is overusing instruments or at least too many instruments playing not in a melody together. Just look at Mozart, he mostly used Cello, Viola, instruments which have near the same basic structure. But you just took so many together.
The guitar is well played, the electronics are not overused and well, what can I say but those great drums are fecking great!? Seriously for some people that may be too much but don't worry, you did great.
When the pan flute came in I almost lost my shit, you have really a feeling when things should get in a song. It's so flowing that you don't even recognize when it comes in. Even the kalimba, DUDE! Carry on! I'd love to hear more from you!
So the Bridge in 2:20 is well placed, maybe there's something you could change there but it's good man it's good. When the second Guitar kicks in I rly lost my shit because dude, I mean I'm a guitarist for like 5 years or smth. and I just love it when someone plays the guitar soooo well.
After 3:30 I just sit here, stopped working and listened to your song totally. You srsly have a hand for those kind of songs. I'm impressed. No really man, I am fucking impressed!
Brolf/5 Stars
You did a unique song, you get on that list, you are good, carry on.