BrolfThePaladin's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[2d Scrolla]

A really unique track. It's kinda unspecial but special. It's like a track for a game where you fly in space with something like the stuff from StarFox. I really like it.

Brolf/5 Stars
Welcome to my awesome List Bro! :)

SAB0TAI responds:

Oh man I'm honored! Thanks for the stars and the mention. Somehow I hadn't even thought of a space game placement but now that's ALL I see haha

[Respite]

This is how you create a good track.

5/5 Stars
Keep the work exactly like that going!

[Vegetables (WIP)]

It is good. But one thing bro one only thing. The vocal sounds man...take a tiny few away. Maybe they're annoying to me 'cos I'm ill. But maybe they're just too much. Besides that.
It's good.

Really good.

4.5/5 Stars
Keep the work goin'!

TIMETRAVL responds:

Thank you for your review, might consider changing the vocals if i'll ever work on it again.

[Summit]

Less "woo!" and you get a perfect.

Nothing to say here, this is cool

5/5 Stars
Follow the Train CJ!

Pi0run-V responds:

Yeah.
I think I'm overusing this sample xD
Thanks! :)

[Creepy Spirit Remake]

The cover is great. I like it. I wouldn't call it a remake, since it's the same song in another style, with less tight beats and no vocals. It's a cover for practicing. Better said, making other peoples stuff with other instruments is practicing.

5/5 Stars
I have nothing to say against it. It's good. Next time, do something by yourself. :)

Im4Hero responds:

Thanks! It was indeed for practicing. ^_^

[Quicksand]

The first part was boring. Could come in way better. The drop was a bit too weak. It sounds like a mix between trap and something steppy. Trapstep? I dunno the drop was weird.

The song had like 3 parts for me, the first one as I said, try again. It was not interesting. The first few seconds are those, where you get the listener to listen to your song. So get that better.
The second 'part' had a nice melody and the interlude was pretty good.
Only thing that could be way better is 'part 3'. An interlude is used to bring the whole composition to "the tip of the spear" how I like to say. It felt like the melody from the 2nd part mixed with another melody. Which may be sometimes pretty cool but it was way too weak for the tip of the spear.

Get yourself the song "Set the world on fire" from 'Redcoon'. Yeah, the track is old, the chicks in the music video may be not the thing you would touch today but just give yourself the way how the music kicks in after the interlude. You really FEEL the difference.

4/5 Stars
It was good. It could be better. Keep it goin'!

[Dididduction 1]

I think you put too much FX in the work. Actually, the beginning is too full. It's getting a bit uninteresting and you don't want it. And the part at 1:30 is just a filler. Fillers are not good. Never let fillers in your tracks. They just make things look like you had no plan at all. And making yourself a plan before making music is essential.

The melody in the first minute also doesn't fit with the melodys in the other minutes. Which is kinda...confusing.

Check this out for learning: http://dmitri.mycpanel.princeton.edu/whatmakesmusicsoundgood.html

3.5/5 Stars
Some good stuff need to get some rework. Keep your work goin'! :)

DididdProducions responds:

1: Full second Response above on Deftone's review.
2: Thank's for the link! Ima check it out.
I made this song to go with a GD level, so I tried to pick out sounds that would go with my theme. I'm sorry if it doesn't sound like music :P