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BrolfThePaladin

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Practice on the bridges of the single melody parts. It was pretty...awkward.
The first ones wasn't SO bad, I almost felt like a french DJ had made that. BUT if you use hard cuts, make sure they "flow" like with the rythm. Just listen to "Gigi D'Agostino" - "Bla Bla Bla" or some tracks from Skrillex. Focus on the rythm and you may learn what I mean with "stay in the rythm when you use hard cuts". But really, the best thing you could do are soft cuts in music, they flow better. I know hard cuts are more oldschool like and nowadays most often used in Dubstep, but using them GOOD is really art man.

3/5 Stars
Keep your work going! You have potential :)

Enzo07 responds:

Thanks for the Review!

1:35 - Too many instruments. Way too many.
It's definitely a video game tune, the screeches are too often used and it's kinda really unspecial. It has potential but atm it's pretty awkward 'cos of this repeating of actually everything. There's nothing special in that track.

Use your imagination, let your creativity flow. You'll find something cool to put it in that tune.

3/5 Stars
Carry on practicing! You'll get better :)

A really unique track. It's kinda unspecial but special. It's like a track for a game where you fly in space with something like the stuff from StarFox. I really like it.

Brolf/5 Stars
Welcome to my awesome List Bro! :)

SAB0TAI responds:

Oh man I'm honored! Thanks for the stars and the mention. Somehow I hadn't even thought of a space game placement but now that's ALL I see haha

This is how you create a good track.

5/5 Stars
Keep the work exactly like that going!

It is good. But one thing bro one only thing. The vocal sounds man...take a tiny few away. Maybe they're annoying to me 'cos I'm ill. But maybe they're just too much. Besides that.
It's good.

Really good.

4.5/5 Stars
Keep the work goin'!

TIMETRAVL responds:

Thank you for your review, might consider changing the vocals if i'll ever work on it again.

Less "woo!" and you get a perfect.

Nothing to say here, this is cool

5/5 Stars
Follow the Train CJ!

Pi0run-V responds:

Yeah.
I think I'm overusing this sample xD
Thanks! :)

The cover is great. I like it. I wouldn't call it a remake, since it's the same song in another style, with less tight beats and no vocals. It's a cover for practicing. Better said, making other peoples stuff with other instruments is practicing.

5/5 Stars
I have nothing to say against it. It's good. Next time, do something by yourself. :)

Im4Hero responds:

Thanks! It was indeed for practicing. ^_^

The first part was boring. Could come in way better. The drop was a bit too weak. It sounds like a mix between trap and something steppy. Trapstep? I dunno the drop was weird.

The song had like 3 parts for me, the first one as I said, try again. It was not interesting. The first few seconds are those, where you get the listener to listen to your song. So get that better.
The second 'part' had a nice melody and the interlude was pretty good.
Only thing that could be way better is 'part 3'. An interlude is used to bring the whole composition to "the tip of the spear" how I like to say. It felt like the melody from the 2nd part mixed with another melody. Which may be sometimes pretty cool but it was way too weak for the tip of the spear.

Get yourself the song "Set the world on fire" from 'Redcoon'. Yeah, the track is old, the chicks in the music video may be not the thing you would touch today but just give yourself the way how the music kicks in after the interlude. You really FEEL the difference.

4/5 Stars
It was good. It could be better. Keep it goin'!

Sick beats.
The vocals are pretty good. Nice recording, the structure of the song is nice.
I didn't had the feeling something could be better. Except the end. It sounds like it's cutted off. Well that's all.

4/5 Stars.
Reedit the end and look out for that hard cut at 0:54 and 1:19. The tip for you is - make it flow, I think you know what I mean with that.

Except the jumpy cuts and the end, it's pretty awesome!

Enzo07 responds:

Thanks Brolf!! :D

I think you put too much FX in the work. Actually, the beginning is too full. It's getting a bit uninteresting and you don't want it. And the part at 1:30 is just a filler. Fillers are not good. Never let fillers in your tracks. They just make things look like you had no plan at all. And making yourself a plan before making music is essential.

The melody in the first minute also doesn't fit with the melodys in the other minutes. Which is kinda...confusing.

Check this out for learning: http://dmitri.mycpanel.princeton.edu/whatmakesmusicsoundgood.html

3.5/5 Stars
Some good stuff need to get some rework. Keep your work goin'! :)

DididdProducions responds:

1: Full second Response above on Deftone's review.
2: Thank's for the link! Ima check it out.
I made this song to go with a GD level, so I tried to pick out sounds that would go with my theme. I'm sorry if it doesn't sound like music :P

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