Practice on the bridges of the single melody parts. It was pretty...awkward.
The first ones wasn't SO bad, I almost felt like a french DJ had made that. BUT if you use hard cuts, make sure they "flow" like with the rythm. Just listen to "Gigi D'Agostino" - "Bla Bla Bla" or some tracks from Skrillex. Focus on the rythm and you may learn what I mean with "stay in the rythm when you use hard cuts". But really, the best thing you could do are soft cuts in music, they flow better. I know hard cuts are more oldschool like and nowadays most often used in Dubstep, but using them GOOD is really art man.
3/5 Stars
Keep your work going! You have potential :)