BrolfThePaladin's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[ICS II]

Lemme say something brolfy at first.
This is schmackonios! \(*_*)/

You got awesome catchy music, It keeps me playing even when I died the 200th time, well done!
You got an idea for that platformer, you executed very well, bugfree physics, challenging but not impossible level design and also a reaaally cool idea with the heat.
You got art for that game that is so on-point, I can't imagine any better with that composition of a game. You 3 pals did a great job and I'd love to pay for that game if you'd sell it on steam or something like that.

Srsly? That game have potential for being an 8-bit A-Title like Terraria or Cave Story (Yeh I know Cave Story was free but 'y know what I mean, you did a great fucking job over there and I want you to feel good about what you created because you deserve it) and well, I just gotta say that this is gonna be definetly one of my favourite indie games 2016.

hmmm...should make a video 'bout that :)

Brolf/5 Stars
Welcome on the awesome list bro's!

[Dead Detention After Story]

Right in the feels T_T
Right in the fucking feels >n<

5/5 Stars
My eyes are allergic to feels, GNAHHH

[Channel]

"10/10 would play again" - SGN

I love that game dude, it's soooo funny I couldn't stop laughing after even 500 times xD

To keep it short - It's original. I mean it's the perfect Job Simulation and on work it's a real stress reducer. You're able to finally do what you want to do sometimes without hurting yourself.

So yeah nothing left to say, you did a great job mate! Technically awesome, idea is awesome, you're just awesome!

5/5 Stars
See you at the front page!

[Snake Headshot Hunter]

I'm the kind of guy who really takes time with his Reviews but when I try to play that game, look at your name and the developer studio name...

No dude...just no...

[Hope is Reborn(Beta)]

No music.
No Sound.
Almost no animation after the first level.
Movement is a bit weird and slow.
Spanish game with english title.

You did your best with crappy abilities but when this is your very best I don't think you can improve but actually everyone can. I'm just asking myself why is someone uploading a game he doesn't like by himself on NG?
Do you really think this is a place where shitty games go?
If yes you should leave.
If obviously no, better overthink your decisions next time or just work on that thing until it's fricking done.

0.5/Stars
Dude...

[zencube]

Nice game, well made, still some issues to fix.
Like the SFX are way louder than the music. The trick is to have the SFX slightly louder than the music so you can actually hear everything but still can enjoy the music of a game. And actually you can hear the background music repeats itself. You shouldn't be able to hear this as a player. Remember that on your next projects.

Also you have a weird name for it. It's a "Zen Cube" but in the whole game you don't have anything that's comparing with "Zen". The mechanics are okay, since you have to click like a madman because you programmed it as mobile game. But after all that idea for a sokoban styled game is cool. Pretty pretty cool.

Just make sure you make next time everything better!

2/5 Stars
Keep 'em goin! You're talented!

[Finding Mars]

First of all - you did a better job than a few other pals I saw here.
Well the idea behind the game is quite nice but it's just like a bit of the idea from somebody, who may just were bored and needed to make a game. No offense, I just felt like that.

The fonts in that game are nice but don't overuse them. 1 as main font and maybe, just maybe another for special things. Typographics are a nice thing to know, you may educate yourself about that here: http://www.creativebloq.com/typography/what-is-typography-123652

Well maybe it's just me but after I found the first time mars, there wasn't any second mars anywhere. After the first disappeared I just had that nice picture with the music.
Apropros music.

The music is going in the right direction but for headphone users like me it's a pain in the ears. For some not, some like that kind of sounds but I don't and many other also. As I said the music is going to the right direction but you should overthink using that tune or not change to another.

You can improve, the game is actually good but you have many things to do left on it. You had a simple idea you made it pretty well.

2/5 Stars
Carry on! You're just on the right track!

piratealx responds:

Thank you BrolfThePaladin for your time reviewing my game.

Your tips are really useful and I'm taking notes to improve the game.

Much appreciated!

[Colors]

Nice time waster.
Should get some things here and there yet, like a menu when you wanna play the game after a while so you don't need to repeat the tutorial again.
The music's pretty catchy and cool.

As I said, nice time waster, could take some improves here and there but it's nice, I like it.
Keep the good work goin', you're on the right track mate!

4/5 Stars
You're good but not quite done yet, keep goin'! :)

pabloaravenaleon responds:

thank you man, i will take some of your advices

[ZOMBIE GRAVEYARD]

Nazi zombies? Rly?
That Window Size also...bruh...
Unoriginal, sound is WAY TOO DAMN LOUD.
And also it's not fun.

0/5 Stars
Waste o' time.

[Concerned Joe]

Voice acting by the one-and-only-legend JohnnyUtah.
DANG I LOVE IT!

Brolf/5 Stars
Welcome on the awesome list Bro!