BrolfThePaladin's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Return]

Nice.
What you could make better?
Well...
Put more effort into it. No one just throws random stuff together and make things like THESE! Boy, you got feelin' for that stuff so don't waste 'yer time and make something REALLY special!

4.5/5 Stars
This is great! Put more work into it and it's AWESOME-LVL is OVER 9000!!!

Sheeepie2 responds:

Haha, thanks. Yeah, I really should try more making tracks, but whenever I even have the smallest plan it never works. I just put stuff down and if it's good, it's good. If not, then I start again.

[Predator]

You need a hook bro.
Yeah I know, lyrical hooks are used in vocal songs but PRINCIPAL it's the same just for melody.

http://www.secretsofsongwriting.com/2012/04/05/3-great-song-hook-types-and-how-to-write-them/

3.5/5 Stars
Good work. Keep on workin'!

Felocai responds:

I'll read that someday prodably.
Thanks!

[Space X-Files]

0:56 - 1:12 - too much of the good. SOME thing in there is too much. After a while listening I THINK it is the little "beep" "boop" "beep" "boop" in the background. I have no idea how to call this xD
But I think you know what I mean, like a star flying from one side to another, I...well THINK this may be the thing which is too much but I don't know if it sounds better without.

Just try it out and listen.

4.5/5 Stars
Great tune, could only get better!

sebastien01 responds:

Thank you very much for the the review! I know there is something wrong with this part :) I'm still working on this one among other projects. The kind of flying star wont be there in the final version. I'll try to make it sound as good as I can. Glad you liked it! :D

[The Forest Calls!]

Basics - Check
Advanced stuff - Check
Unique stuff in tune - Check

Congratulations, you passed the awesome Test!

Brolf/5 Stars
Welcome on the awesome list Bro!

demon1000 responds:

:D :D :D

[{DJ-L} Patterns]

My apologies but this...aw god damn.
Here https://www.ableton.com/en/blog/making-music-book-of-creative-strategies/
Learn, improve and come back then again. I don't want to tear new musicians down.

0.5/5 Stars
Go fourth and learn, young one! \(°_°)/

LavaRift responds:

Although this is far in my past, I appreciate the feedback.

[Pixel Night Lights...]

I have absolutely nothing to say on this. I mean this positively.

Brolf/5 Stars
GG EZ

demon1000 responds:

Thanks!

[Winter Solstice]

I'm no expert in House music. So you may judge me if I'm completely wrong at this but something was missing in there. I have no Idea what it is precisely but it needs something that make this track special. I have no Idea what kind of special thing, but something. Just sounded like every else song from the electric scene I have heard.
Tbh I think after all it was pretty good. Just this special thing was missing.

4.5/5 Stars
Keep the work goin' mate!

FrenZeon responds:

Sidechain compression, good mastering skills, excitement in the drop portion of the song, and better mixing skills. Correct???

[The Comet]

Sound more like 2 tracks in one but with the same pattern. It's good. I like it. Technically, personally and also just total neutral it's good.
I won't say it's outrageous, something's still missing to be in my awesome list but it's a really good tune.

5/5 Stars
Really good work bro! Keep it goin'!

Pi0run-V responds:

Thanks man! :D

[Simon Vonck - Happy]

All I have to say is

Werke harder.

Srsly m8, this track is O.K. but you need some music lessons or at least way more hours on sound design so that this track sounds in my ears good.
After 2 Minutes my ears started to bleed and this is the most bad sign you can have when I review your music.

1.5/5 Stars
It's dangerous to go alone, take this! (http://creatingsound.com/learning/tutorials/)

SimonVonck responds:

okay, thanks