Itchy, tasty... oh wait, that's something else/
Great execution, nice idea, I won't see this scientifically.
Your shadows are pretty good, well you could put more work in the fine lines on the right one. I see you put more work in the shadows on the left fella as on the right.
After all it could use more color. You have a colorful background but the figurines are blank. Just pure black and white. Which let it looks like it's not done.
Great work, keep it going!
I messed up on the shadows on the right brain character. I will admit that. Thanks for the review. I'm thinking of adding a bit of color and fixing the shadows for a re-upload / remake.
You know I'm more the one for the long reviews...but today...
Okay, now to the in-depth one.
Everything's cool. But the pentagrams. They're uneven. I think you know that 'cos of Kirky. Okay okay, one thing. The figurine. It's unclear if he goes away and looks back or just stand with his weapon behind him, looking to the viewer. You should clear that by practice more. This comes with experience. So do everything. Just keep on sailin' matey!
Great but still some stuff to do.
Thanks Man! i will make a reboot soon...
Nice. I really love Undertale.
The thing foor me is, he looks kinda too bold and his eye shines blue instead of green. Yeah I know art'n'stuff but that's my opinion.
Now to the neutral opinion.
Gr8 work d00d. Nothing left to say, there's everything okay BUT...it lacks a bit of background. [SPOILER]
Maybe the church? You know the hallway where it goes to ASGORE.
Now to the fanboy opinion.
SANS *_* ♥
All in all
You really work'd you to the BONE didn't 'ya?
Thanks for your review. I wanted to do the church background, but I got sick and uploaded this prematurely.
I know shingeki no kyojin as good as I know Newgrounds.
Lemme tell ya, you did an awesome work bro.
No wonder for the frontpage, you did a great job.
Keep' on sailin' bro!
Could work a bit more on shadows. Just a tiny tinie bit but that'll come with experience.
Just the missing space in "OH NO!IF..." is a bit awkward.
After all - great job d00d!
Great work - well done.
Just this...smiley face up there xDD
Keep your work up bro!
Oh no not again XD!!! Yeah i forgot about that area so yeah it looks like a smiley... Thanks again! Still improving though...
Looks pretty neat. It's nice to see some good pixel artists here.
I have a little thing or two to criticise at your art. First, those 2 black strings in the glass up there, looks quite unclear if these are cracks or something else in the glass and the second - sit back and look as far as possible on your work, if you don't see it, close your eyes until you see only a little gap of light and see on your work. You see what I see? Yeah, the body is way brighter than the whole head. I see you want to use a little bit of lightning works in there but you know, not the whole head is a shadow.
Good work! Keep going!
Thanks man for pointing That Out! And I am still getting into pixel art so yeah...early stuff...Thanks again!
I still don't know if you are a troll or not, I think you are something between 4chan, NG and "Yeeeh!" you know? But anyway, I'm here to review your art not you :P
So yeah, the proportions may be good but the sun shines from the background to the dinosaur, your shadows aren't all accurate, the cloud needs to hang a bit higher or put it away at all, it's unclear if it's a normal cloud or just smoke from the Dino's nose, who is then maybe a drake? Just take the cloud away and it should look fine.
The birds are 'nice' but those things kinda remind me on my child drawings where you use to put the sun always in the corner with some birds flying into it like fecking Icarus. If you put more detail to the birds, make 'em bigger or something like that, it should look awesome. Although your style is more derpy, you should take a look at actual pictures of that flying dinosaurs and study them. Draw them in your style then you'll be able to make that picture epic (http://pichost.me/1348304/)
Well all I have to say is, that you done a nice job but you are way to go to make that picture awesome.
Carry on! I like 'yer style
Wow, this is sooo good mate I mean...
You can even feel the emptiness. I mean the emptiness inside you know.
It's just like one of those moments where everything is lost, without any music, sound or anything and after that short moment *flapp* - gone.
I can't describe how good this concept looks for me and I'm a frickin' poet dude! Won't you make a bloody poet speechless, will ya!? :D
So yeah, from the other point of view, nice concept art, the right tentacle on the top should need some redrawing it looks a tiny little pity bittle flat and the tentacles itself looks a bit to sharpy for a kraken. What I exactly mean is like, tentacles are going more flawing like...phew, have a look at this art as example http://www.goodkind.fi/kraken_705-344.jpg and look close at the tentacles. They go more with the flow of the underwater-waves. You know, they are going not like those.
Also I know what you did there with the mouth of the kraken huehuehue, H.P.Lovecraft reference incoming :3
Well if it should look more dangerous throw more teeth at it. The tiny ones. I know it's a shitload of work but it's worth it.
So for the light, the left big tooth you missed with the shadows a bit or I just can't see it right here cos it's almost damn midnight but ths is the only thing, maybe the tentacle in the back right you should overthink a bit with the light cos the tip of it looks pretty dark and well the light shines almost right on it if I saw that arrow right.
After all you did a great job and I look forward for more art from you mate.
Amazing, yet still some stuff to do.
Wow! Thanks for the detailed review :)
I appreciate the kind words - yeah Lovecraft is a big influence - he's not technically a Kraken, he's an old god from a Comic Book I'm working on. His name is The Memory Eater - I haven't giving him a proper "Cthulu" name yet.
Thanks for the critique -I'll be uploading the inked version in a couple of days.
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