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Tasty

deathink responds:

Itchy, tasty... oh wait, that's something else/

You know I'm more the one for the long reviews...but today...

FRONTPAAAGE FRONTPAAAAGE!!!

Okay, now to the in-depth one.
Everything's cool. But the pentagrams. They're uneven. I think you know that 'cos of Kirky. Okay okay, one thing. The figurine. It's unclear if he goes away and looks back or just stand with his weapon behind him, looking to the viewer. You should clear that by practice more. This comes with experience. So do everything. Just keep on sailin' matey!

4.5/5 Stars
Great but still some stuff to do.

demon1000 responds:

Thanks Man! i will make a reboot soon...

Great work - well done.
Just this...smiley face up there xDD

4.5/5 Stars
Keep your work up bro!

demon1000 responds:

Oh no not again XD!!! Yeah i forgot about that area so yeah it looks like a smiley... Thanks again! Still improving though...

Looks pretty neat. It's nice to see some good pixel artists here.

I have a little thing or two to criticise at your art. First, those 2 black strings in the glass up there, looks quite unclear if these are cracks or something else in the glass and the second - sit back and look as far as possible on your work, if you don't see it, close your eyes until you see only a little gap of light and see on your work. You see what I see? Yeah, the body is way brighter than the whole head. I see you want to use a little bit of lightning works in there but you know, not the whole head is a shadow.

4/5 Stars
Good work! Keep going!

demon1000 responds:

Thanks man for pointing That Out! And I am still getting into pixel art so yeah...early stuff...Thanks again!

Wow, this is sooo good mate I mean...
You can even feel the emptiness. I mean the emptiness inside you know.
It's just like one of those moments where everything is lost, without any music, sound or anything and after that short moment *flapp* - gone.

I can't describe how good this concept looks for me and I'm a frickin' poet dude! Won't you make a bloody poet speechless, will ya!? :D

So yeah, from the other point of view, nice concept art, the right tentacle on the top should need some redrawing it looks a tiny little pity bittle flat and the tentacles itself looks a bit to sharpy for a kraken. What I exactly mean is like, tentacles are going more flawing like...phew, have a look at this art as example http://www.goodkind.fi/kraken_705-344.jpg and look close at the tentacles. They go more with the flow of the underwater-waves. You know, they are going not like those.

Also I know what you did there with the mouth of the kraken huehuehue, H.P.Lovecraft reference incoming :3
Well if it should look more dangerous throw more teeth at it. The tiny ones. I know it's a shitload of work but it's worth it.

So for the light, the left big tooth you missed with the shadows a bit or I just can't see it right here cos it's almost damn midnight but ths is the only thing, maybe the tentacle in the back right you should overthink a bit with the light cos the tip of it looks pretty dark and well the light shines almost right on it if I saw that arrow right.

After all you did a great job and I look forward for more art from you mate.

4/5 Stars
Amazing, yet still some stuff to do.

LinkTCOne responds:

Wow! Thanks for the detailed review :)

I appreciate the kind words - yeah Lovecraft is a big influence - he's not technically a Kraken, he's an old god from a Comic Book I'm working on. His name is The Memory Eater - I haven't giving him a proper "Cthulu" name yet.

Thanks for the critique -I'll be uploading the inked version in a couple of days.

It's awesome! AWESOME!

AWESOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOME!!!

5/5 Stars
Welcome on the fabulous list!

Siddharth27 responds:

Thank you soooooooo much... This appreciation means a lottttt to me... :)

Mother of god.
It's fabulous and cool at the same time!

I just can't describe how I feel about that mate it's perfect!

AWESOME/5 Stars
Srsly I rly can't find anything bad at it.
Welcome on the AWESOME List Bro.

LinkTCOne responds:

Oh gosh that's a lot of enthusiasm right there, thanks bro.

Nice idea, funny made, for a cartoon I'd use another backround but except for this you did a great job!
Keep your work goin', you only can get better with that! :)

4.5/5 Stars
LIKE A BOSS!
And High Fives allround!

iluvdessert responds:

Thanks!

This is frickin' awesome! I love that art, especially because I like steampunk.
I'd rly rly do love to work with you if you're interested because I love your drawing style, carry on mate, you're awesome!

5/5 Stars

SoraNgin responds:

Thanks bud, I really appreciate that! Sorry I didn't see this comment til now. What did you have in mind? :)

This just looks so damn awesome. Really I love it, the smoke, the proportions and aaah holy macarony, I love it.
5/5 Stars

SoraNgin responds:

Awww thank you man! You are too kind! :D

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